Foundation Task Script Progression (By Arthur Young)

The script went through two main revisions, following the same basic story, especially towards the first half of the video. The main change occurs in the positioning of the two brothers, suggesting more of a "hierarchy" between the two brothers, in who does what task. In the original script, it is Lucas (the younger, more timid brother) in the kitchen, associating the younger and less confident character a role deemed more feminine. 

In the newer script, Jamie is in the kitchen, which we believe is an expression of Jamie's inherent responsibility as an older brother, leaving Lucas the less complicated and strenuous task of picking a film to watch. 

There are some discrepancies between the script and our final edit, namely the reduced amount of conversation between the two brothers, such as when Eagle (Perp 1) is hiding from Lucas outside, and just after Lucas shuts the front door to go back to his task. This was mostly to cut down on time, and make our project within the two minutes allotted, and to reduce the amount of awkward or unnecessary dialogue.

The Old Script: 

The New Script: